It was Christmas Eve. Fog stuck to the tarmac at the
Lindbergh airfield. A silhouette glides gracefully through the mist with a
certain elegance. A quick pace separating the fog with heavy footsteps clambers
as if in a hurry. The silhouette calmly
flows as if taken by the frozen breeze in the night air. The pace quickens with
louder steps and a hurried breathe follows as if struggling. The silhouette enters the neighboring forest
with finesse and agility, and arrives quietly at a stream. The pace has slowed
with heavy breathing, and finds the stream quietly trickling, with ice floating
down it almost invisible. The silhouette
is already down the stream walking at its bank looking for what it needs to
survive. The pace is down to a walk, gasping for breath white air fills the air
from the cold that has flown in. The silhouette
stops, it has found the spot, quickly it lays down. The pace is a limp, not
wanting to continue, an inability to run anymore it plops itself down behind a
large oak. The snow white wolf finishes
off its kill, slowly rotted and picked clean it leaves. The young fawn bitten on the leg a month
before, is met by the silhouette and bleeds out in the freshly fallen
snow. The wolf silhouettes itself back
into the fog in the airfield, the hole in the chain link fences connects the
two realms in quiet symmetry. The hunt continues
through the cold Christmas Eve fog.
PS: My story in some ways would be with her opinion, because my does I end in violence and it doesn't really have a hero or a resolution. But my stories also has a resolution life goes on, it has a life or death situation which for one side solves a problem and the other doesn't. she in my opinion would not be able to be against my story
PS: My story in some ways would be with her opinion, because my does I end in violence and it doesn't really have a hero or a resolution. But my stories also has a resolution life goes on, it has a life or death situation which for one side solves a problem and the other doesn't. she in my opinion would not be able to be against my story
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