One act play revised and now a MID TERM:                          OREO

Lorenzo: MARK!!!!!

Mark: WHAT!!!!!

Lorenzo: Did you eat the last Oreo from the package.

(Entering the kitchen) Mark: No I didn’t “eat the last OREO from the package.”

Lorenzo: I’m guaranteeing that you ate that frickin Oreo.

Mark: L you gotta calm down, But no I di-

(Interrupting) Lorenzo: You did

Mark: chill out dude, I didn-

Lorenzo: you did

Mark: L you know I didn’t.

Lorenzo: I don’t know you “didn’t” I haven’t seen you in like two days “bro”

Mark: you saw me yesterday, I came in after school I had my red coat on you know the one with the Adidas symbol.

Lorenzo: No that coat was on the floor next to your room when I got home, you never had it on.

Mark: L you saw me yesterday I talked to you we had a conversation about the Oreo's now that I think about it.

Lorenzo: Your delusional, I haven’t talked to anyone except Kevin Petro

Mark: Kevin lives twenty miles away.  You lost your license last week there’s no way you saw Kevin.

Lorenzo: He came here.

Mark: In What?!??!, He does not have a car?

Lorenzo: he came in his moped

Mark: His what?!!?

Lorenzo: a little motorized scooter stupid.

Mark: Well no s*** L, I know what a moped is, but when did he get it?

Lorenzo: I don’t know sometime last week

Mark: From where?

Lorenzo: I don’t know exactly

Mark: did he say how much he spent?

Lorenzo: No.

Mark: Did you ask him?

Lorenzo: Yea, but that’s irrelevant.

Mark: So you’re saying you don’t know where it’s from, when he got it, how much it costs or any of the details.

Lorenzo: yea.

Mark: So basically Kevin stole the moped

Lorenzo: No, No, No? I don’t think so?

Mark: I think Kevin stole the moped

Mark: He is Kind of….. Um…. well not all there

Lorenzo: no he’s just…. he’s just dumb, and he definitely didn’t steal that moped

Mark: How can you argue he didn’t?

 Lorenzo: Cause he is a good kid

Mark: He lives with his brother who has been in and out of jail for the past 10 years he’s probably not a great kid, i mean i don't like to judge a book by its cover, but his is pretty torn up.

Lorenzo: It’s his STEP brother STEEEEPPP brother not a brother, brother, a STEP brother

Mark: His mom left when he was young and his dad is a former ,cough cocaine cough, addict

Lorenzo: Well his dad is OK now

Mark: He relapsed last year remember

Lorenzo: No….

Mark: He did, now you look dumb cuz you don’t know anything about one of YOUR best friends.

Lorenzo: Well, Well, You ate my Oreo.  

Mark: What gave you the right to the Oreo Anyways?

Lorenzo: Kevin brought them when he rode over

Mark: In his stolen moped

Lorenzo: Whatever

Mark: Did he steal the Oreo's to

Lorenzo: No!

Mark: So he did.

Lorenzo: I don’t know

Mark: So whatever store Kevin stole that Oreo box from, is the true owner of the Oreo's right?

Lorenzo: I mean i guess, but what does that have  to do with any of this?

Mark: Well that store was CVS, Which is where I work.

Lorenzo: OK?

Mark: There is a little scooter store dealership next door, So in theory he stole the moped from the scooter store, and the Oreo's from my CVS…

Lorenzo: SO…….

Mark: ( pulling out the Oreo and popping it in his mouth): It's...(crunching)....Mine 

I put in a few modifying statements that make more sense i fixed some punctuation and made some previous statements make more sense 

One act play ORIGINAL                           OREO
 

Lorenzo: MARK!!!!!

Mark: WHAT!!!!!

Lorenzo: Did you eat the last Oreo from the package.

(Entering the kitchen) Mark: No I didn’t “eat the last OREO from the package.”

Lorenzo: I’m guaranteeing that you ate that frickin Oreo.

Mark: But I di-

(Interrupting) Lorenzo: You did

Mark: I didn-

Lorenzo: you did

Mark: L you know I didn’t.

Lorenzo: I don’t know you “didn’t” I haven’t seen you in like two days “bro”

Mark: you saw me yesterday, I came in after school I had my red coat on you know the one with the adidas symbol.

Lorenzo: No that coat was on the floor next to your room when I got home, you never had it on.

Mark: L you saw me yesterday I talked to you we had a conversation about the Oreos now that I think about it.

Lorenzo: Your delusional, I haven’t talked to anyone except Kevin Petro

Mark: Kevin lives twenty miles away.  You lost your license last week there’s no way you saw Kevin.

Lorenzo: He came here.

Mark: In What?!??!

Lorenzo: his moped

Mark: His what

Lorenzo: a little motorized scooter stupid.

Mark: Well not s*** L, I know what a moped is but when did he get that?

Lorenzo: I don’t know sometime last week

Mark: From where.

Lorenzo: I don’t know exactly

Mark: did he say how much he spent?

Lorenzo: No.

Mark: Did you ask him?

Lorenzo: Yea, but that’s irrelevant.

Mark: So you’re saying you don’t know where it’s from, when he got it, how much it costs or any of the details.

Lorenzo: yea.

Mark: So basically Kevin stole the moped

Lorenzo: No, No, No? I don’t think so?

Mark: I think Kevin stole the moped

Mark: He is Kind of….. Um…. well not all there

Lorenzo: no he’s just…. he’s just dumb, and he definitely didn’t steal that moped

Mark: How can you argue he didn’t?

 Lorenzo: Cause he is a good kid

Mark: He lives with his step brother who has been in and out of jail for the past 10 years he’s probably not a great kid

Lorenzo: It’s his STEP brother STEEEEPPP brother not a brother, brother, step brother

Mark: His mom left the house when he was young and his dad is a former addict

Lorenzo: Well his dad is ok now

Mark: He relapsed last year remember

Lorenzo: No….

Mark: He did, now you look dumb cus you don’t know anything about one of YOUR best friends.

Lorenzo: Well, Well, You ate my Oreo.  

Mark: What gave you the right to the Oreo Anyways?

Lorenzo: Kevin brought them when he rode over

Mark: In his stolen moped

Lorenzo: Whatever

Mark: Did he steal the Oreos to

Lorenzo: No?

Mark: So he did.

Lorenzo: I don’t know

Mark: So whatever store Kevin got the Oreos from is where that last Oreo belongs to.

Lorenzo: In theory.

Mark: Ok so that store was CVS, Which is where I work.

Lorenzo: Ok

Mark: There is a little scooter store dealership next door, So in theory he stole the moped from the scooter store, and the Oreos from my CVS…

Lorenzo: SO…….

Mark( pulling out the Oreo and popping it in his mouth): It is mine.