Those peer reviews tho

Sean.E: On your self deprication.  I feel ya, i liked  the post made me remember how i felt, had its really funny moments along with sad desperate moments, but thats what made it good.

Nick.R: Self deprecation.  I really liked it i laughed at the story, cause it made me remember my own expieriences as a gamer,  there was alot of good things in the story that a thought would make it really worth reading.

Maggie.T: self deprecation(i think/hope):  I thought it was really funny and relatable it made me think in the same way for a while it was presented as if the story was being read by you, which i liked, also its how i think 90 % of the time